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The Greatest Show…Anywhere

A few weeks ago, when I was doing the series Seven Days of Online Fiction, I looked at what was the then current issue of Beneath Ceaseless Skies on Day 1.  Because I wasn’t reviewing series fiction as part of the Seven Days, I only examined one story.  The one I didn’t look at was “The Finest Spectacle Anywhere” by Genevieve Valentine.  After I posted the review, the editor, Scott Andrews, kindly sent me an email telling me the story was self-contained. 

I’d intended to go back and look at the story.  Then Ringling Brothers and Barnum & Bailey circus came to town.  They’re set up at the coliseum getting ready for a series of performances that start tomorrow.  I’ve been driving by the elephants going to and from work every day this week.  What better motivation to visit a circus in a fantasy world?

“The Finest Spectacle Anywhere” concerns a small traveling sideshow in a world torn by war for decades.  In addition to performing, they also scavenge the ruins.  The viewpoint character is known as Little George.  He’s sort of the roustabout, but he wants to be a performer.  The only way to do that is have Boss perform some type of operation on him to replace his bones with copper.  The trapeze artist, Elena, doesn’t want him to have the operation.  There’s some uncertainty as who is actually in charge, Boss or Elena.

Little George doesn’t get much respect.  He gets even less when juggler Peter joins the troupe.  Of course Peter is up to no good, and Little George seems to be the only one who suspects.  Things proceed in a fairly straightforward manner from this point, so I’ll not say anymore about the plot.

This story is rather short, and as a result, we don’t learn a great deal about some of the members of the circus.  And by the end, they’re calling themselves a circus, not a sideshow.  There’s some significance to that.  Sideshows and circuses seem to have different military and political implications in this world.  Valentine implies there will be consequences of this change in title, some good, some bad.

And that in many ways is one of the more intriguing things about the story.  The world. We’re not told if this is a future Earth or a secondary fantasy world.  Well, not in this tale at any rate.  There’s a previous story, “Bread and Circuses” in an earlier issue of BCS as well as a novel, Mechanique:  A Tale of the Circus Tresaulti, which was released earlier this year.  I think I’m going to have to check them out.  Valentine gives just enough hints about the characters that I want to know more about them.  Especially Panadrome, who has some sort of accordion built into his body.  This was a glimpse into a fascinating world, and I’m going to take the opportunity to go back and visit.

Seven Days of Online Fiction, Day 8: Recap

So a week ago today, I acted on this crazy idea I had to look at a different venue for online fiction every day for a week, with as much a focus as possible on fantasy.  I called the project Seven Days of Online Fiction.  It started when I read Karen Burnham’s list of work that had received multiple award nominations this year; most of the short fiction was available online.  (Karen updated the list on Wednesday.) 

I’ve had the opinion for a long time now that what has been appearing online is just as good as what the print magazines have been publishing.  I intentionally left anthologies out of the mix because even the few anthology series that appear regularly have at least a year between volumes and are often trumpeted as Events.  I wanted to look at what was appearing on a consistent basis.

So I managed to read and post for seven days in a row, although the last couple of days were a bit of a strain from a time commitment perspective.  Links to each day are in the sidebar on the right.  The next time I do something like this, I’ll have at least half the posts done before any go live.  Anyway, I thought I would take today, Day 8, if you’ll allow, to look back and see what I’ve learned from this experience.

First, let me review the parameters.  I love science fiction, but I tried to restrict myself to fantasy since that’s the focus of this blog.  There are a number of great sites that specialize in science fiction; needless to say, they weren’t considered.  There are also some sites that publish both science fiction and fantasy.  I had hoped to feature Clarkesworld and Strange Horizons, but the stories in those were science fiction.  At least they appeared to be; I skimmed the first few paragraphs but didn’t have time to read them all the way through if I was to stay on schedule.  I’ll go back and read them at my leisure now that this project is complete.  Because I was looking at the current issues, any stories in the archives were out of bounds. 

Also, I didn’t look at Tor.com or Subterranean.  These are two of the major hitters.  While Tor.com accepts unsolicited manuscripts, in their guidelines they discourage submissions from writers who aren’t established pros.  Subterranean, at least last I heard, is by invitation only.  I wanted to see what was showing up by newer writers.

Finally, I restricted myself to venues which had fiction posted for free, which eliminated sites such as Orson Scott Card’s Intergalactic Medicine Show.  There were a couple of reasons for this.  First, cash flow is incredibly tight at the moment because my wife is recovering from surgery and we’re paying bills on my salary until she goes back to work in a couple of weeks.  Until then, reading material that costs money is a luxury I’m having to do without.  Also,  I wanted anyone who was interested in reading one of the stories I looked at to be able to do so without an outlay of cash.  That’s not to say I think fiction online should be free.  I don’t.  I believe in paying for quality product so the producers of said product can continue to produce.  For the purposes of this project, I wanted it to be as inclusive and convenient as possible to my readers.  If you enjoy the fiction on a site, you should consider contributing or subscribing.

I read a total of10 stories and ranked them on the basis of quality using a binary classification.  Either the quality was high or low.  I classified 8 of them high, although a few were marginal.  I suspect those of you who read the stories took issue with me on some.

The sites I visited were the following (in order):  Beneath Ceaseless Skies, Heroic Fantasy Quarterly, Electric Spec, Ideomancer Speculative Fiction, Fantasy Magazine, Abyss & Apex, and Quantum Muse.  Obviously, I read more than one story from a couple of the venues.  Those were Heroic Fantasy Quarterly, Ideomancer, and Electric Spec. For each magazine, I asked one simple question:  If I had never read this magazine before (and in some cases I hadn’t), did I enjoy this story enough to make me want to read more from this particular venue?  The only one where I said “No” was Ideomancer.  Not that the pieces weren’t well written, but there wasn’t much action in them.  One was a Bradbury-esque mood piece.  The other read like something out of an MFA class.  Neither had much in the way of plot, and I found the character development minimal in both.  Probably because characters grow through experiences, especially challenging experiences. 

The others, though, are all sources I’ll go back to.  I’m not sure all of them will become things I’ll read regularly, but they’re worth checking out.  For what it’s worth, I’ll check back in with Ideomancer.  Hopefully you looked at some of these and found a new source of fiction. 

So what’s the significance of Seven Days of Online Fiction?  Not much in the big scheme of things. There was nothing scientific in my methods.  One of the flaws with my approach is that I’m taking a random sample, and it’s quite possible that what I found in any of these magazines was better than average or worse than average.  For the ones I was familiar with, I know that’s not the case, but that’s only three of them.  Second, this was entirely subjective.  What I like, you might not.  A story I think stinks could sweep all the awards it’s eligible for next year.  Then there’s the physical aspect.  Fatigue can make a difference in how a person views a story, as well as what type of day they had at work, etc.

So to summarize, I decided to randomly look at seven different online publications, some familiar, some new, and see what type of quality I could find.  What I found was some good, solid fantasy.  Some better than others.  I also discovered some new writers, writers I’ll keep an eye out for in the future.  And I had a number of enjoyable evenings reading.  And that may be one of the most important things I got from this little exercise.

Seven Days of Online Fiction, Day 1: Beneath Ceaseless Skies

The first story we’ll be looking at in our Seven Day of Online Fiction is”Buzzard’s Final Bow” by Jason S. Ridler in the May 5 issue of Beneath Ceaseless Skies.  This is issue number 68 for those of you who are counting. The other story in the issue is “The Finest Spectacle Anywhere” by Genevieve Valentine.  It’s the second in a series.  Since one of the rules of The Seven Days is to only look at standalone stories, it won’t be considered here.  It looks intriguing, though, so I may post about it after The Seven Days.

“Buzzard’s Final Bow” concerns an aging former gladiator, Buzzard, an old wrong for which he’s been trying to atone for years, and an evil task he’s been given.  The story is well told, and while it doesn’t hold any great surprises or unusual twists, it’s compelling. 

Buzzard is a flawed hero.  He carries a tiger around in a cage, to which he’s chained.  And this is the only problem I had with the story.  We’re not given a lot of detail about the cage, but he’s chained to it.  The chains seem to be quite long, because he is able to go into another room without taking off the chains or taking the cage with him.  Having drag this cage and tiger around with him everywhere went pushed the limits of my suspension of disbelief.  If that’s what he actually does.  I may be misinterpreting things a bit.

Anyway, the plot is fairly simple.  Lady Astra is the regent for the young Lord Konrad, a weak and sickly lad.  She wants him out of the way so she can assume the throne, as regents are wont to do.  She knows Buzzard was once Bazzar Kiln, a slave who won his freedom in the arena, where she once watched him perform.  Buzzard’s freedom is in some way tied to his tiger companion, Lady Razor, and it’s her life Lasy Astra uses as leverage.

For a short story, this one is deep and surprisingly moving.  As we learn more about the circumstances under which Buzzard gained his freedom, he becomes more and more sympathetic.  There’s also more to the young Lord Konrad than we’re first led to believe.  He has unplumbed depths of courage. 

I’ll not say more because I don’t want to spoil the ending.  Ridler doesn’t take the easy way out.  He’s set up a situation involving guilt and atonement, and he doesn’t flinch from the harsh reality of either of those things.  This is one that will stick with me.

I’ve not read any of Mr. Ridler’s work before, but he’s published in a variety of smaller venues.  If this story is typical of his work, then I expect his name will be appearing on the tables of contents in the venues with wider circulation soon.  I’m certainly interested in reading more of his work.

This series, Seven Days of Online Fiction, was started to see just how high the quality of short fiction online is.  Over half of the short fiction with multiple award nominations this year were published online.  While I won’t even attempt to pick award nominees, much less award winners, I will say that this story is of high enough quality that if I weren’t familiar with Beneath Ceaseless Skies, and this were the first story published there that I’d read, I would read more.

Quality count (high, low), end of Day One: 1-0.

More Beneath Ceaseless Skies

In a previous post a few nights ago, I reviewed one of the two stories in the current issue of Beneath Ceaseless Skies.  At the time, I was under the weather, and so passed on reading and reviewing the second in favor of getting some much needed rest.  Some of you may  have thought that it was hardly fair to Eljay Daly, the author of the second story, “Dirt Witch“.  And I would agree with you.  So today I read that story, and here’s my review of it.

The story concerns a young girl named Dorota in the village of Szukowo.  The village is plagued by ghosts of soldiers.  If you have the misfortune to be caught outside after dark during the winter, you can be shot or bayonetted.  Some years ago, Dorota’s father stole a fire-flower from a witch, and since then the villagers have been able to defend themselves.  Unfortunately, as the story opens, Dorota’s father has died in a drowning accident, the details of which we’re not given.  What matters is now the village has no defense against the ghosts.  Mocked by her grandmother for not being as brave as her father, Dorota decides to find the witch and try to bargain for another flower.  Of course, it’s not going to be that easy. 

Daly does an excellent job of gradually revealing to the reader that things are quite what they seem.  Did I say “quite what they seem”?  Things aren’t at all what they seem.  The inside of the witch’s house is bigger than the outside and truly creepy.  There’s been a pattern in recent years to make witches good and beautiful.  I view this trend in much the same way I view the current fad of vampires being sensitive, attractive, and glittery in sunlight.  In other words, a bunch of bunk, a heap of horse puckey, and a cartload of crap.  (I toned that last sentence down in the interest of being sensitive to those of differing taste.)  I’m pleased to say that Daly has made her witch truly vile and despicable.  The woman is evil, but not without understandable motives.  This is a tough thing to pull off, especially in a short story, and most especially when the witch is only onstage for a what would be a few pages in a print venue.  Oh, and I thought the antlers were a nice touch, Eljay.

I don’t normally care for stories involving witches, partly for the reason listed above, but I enjoyed this one.  Eljay Daly is a new writer, and if this story is typical of her work, she’s going to be one to watch.  While this wasn’t heroic fantasy in the strictest sense, Dorota definitely shows courage and heroism and isn’t afraid to fight with whatever at hand can be used as a weapon.

As I’ve said before, I’m not very familiar with BCS, but based on what I’ve read so far, that is going to change.  If you’ve not checked out Beneath Ceaseless Skies, do.  The stories are high quality and well written.  The magazine advertises itself as a literary fantasy magazine.  Usually when something promotes itself as literary, I tend to treat it with a bit of skepticism since much of what’s called literary sacrifices story for style.  That’s not the case with BCS.  They’ve combined the best of story and substance.  I hope they’re around for a long time.

New Issue of Beneath Ceaseless Skies

I’ve been a bit under the weather since I got back from ConDFW, so this will be a short post.  I’m getting better, thank you.  (And thank you, pharmaceuticals.  Better living through chemistry!)

A new issue of Beneath Ceaseless Skies was posted today.  You should check it out.  I’ve been aware of BCS for a while but only recently began reading it.  I do enough reading on a computer screen as part of my dayjobbery that I haven’t kept up with the online publications like I should.  That’s in the process of changing.

Anyway, BCS posts new issues every two weeks, usually with two stories.  The current issue leads off with “The Ghost of Shinoda Forest”, by Richard Parks, a tale of honor and loss in feudal Japan.  This story showcases Parks’ ability to develop mood and character in a short space, and is one of the better stories I’ve read in a while.  It also is the latest in a series, but functions perfectly well as a stand-alone. 

I met Parks when he was a regular attendee at the early Conestogas, the SFF convention in Tulsa.  This would have been in the late 90’s and early 00’s.  He quit coming after a few years.  I remember him as a soft spoken man, but one who was easy to talk to.  I’ve long thought him to be one of the more underrated writers working at short fiction lengths in fantasy for the last decade.  It would be nice to see him get more recognition.  He has several collections out, and has a web page, which unfortunately doesn’t seem to have been updated in a while.  There is a bibliography there, if you’re interested in reading more of his work.  Of course if you’re one of those people who like things current, check his livejournal page.  It was updated yesterday.

The second story, “Dirt Witch” by Eljay Daly, I haven’t read it yet.  Since I’m not feeling at the top of my game, I probably won’t read it tonight.  I’m going to turn in early.  When my energy levels are back up, I’ll post a short review.  Until then, I’m starting to fade and need to call it a night.

What I Read While Stuck in Airports

I’ve been on the road for the last few days, traveling due to dayjobbery.  I’ve spent a lot of time in the air and in airports.  I had to make two connections to get where I was going and again to get home.  I took my Nook with me, loaded with stuff.  Unfortunately, you aren’t supposed to have the things on during taxiing, takeoff, and landing.  Something about interfering with the plane’s navigational system or something.  I’m not sure of the details. 

Anyhoo, before I left I bought and downloaded the Beneath Ceaseless Skies anthology.  This is a collection stories from the first year of the magazine.  I must confess to not being as familiar with the publication as I need to be.  That’s going to change.  I’m only about a third of the way through, but the stories are top notch.  Less sword and sorcery than I prefer, but still good high quality, well-written pieces.  Worth checking out, and for three bucks, you will get your money’s worth.  All proceeds go to the authors and artists.  Check it out, along with the magazine.  I’ll be posting about it more in the future.

In addition to reading a business book and the current issue of Ellery Queen’s Mystery Magazine, I ended up getting a used paperback copy of David Drake’s Other Times Than PeaceI pretty much only read this one on the way back while I couldn’t read the Nook, so I only got about 130 pages into it, finishing the first two stories.  Still, Drake does a good job of pulling you into a tale with only a few words.  One of the things I like best about his work is that he draws on ancient history.  He’s another author I need to read more of.

I still haven’t started the latest McDevitt, Echo, and since he’ll be at ConDFW next weekend, I need to get moving on that.  I haven’t had much time to blog lately, but I thought I would pass along some recommendations on what I’ve read lately.  Expect a report on ConDFW when I get back.  Until then, look for at least one more post later this week.